雅思考试技巧之对一篇作文的详细评点(上
本文来自雅思作文网liuxuequn.com《对一篇作文的详细评点(上》。 各位同学: 何钢将于2月24日至3月3日离京,在此期间可能无法及时回复各位的帖子。为帮助大家提高作文水平,了解雅思写作要求,在此公布本人用心批改的一篇学生作文,供大家参考。版权所有,请勿随意转贴。如欲转贴,请注明(北京新东方何钢)。 题目: Now many people think that we are spending too much time and money on protecting animals. The money should be better spent on human population. Do you agree or disagree? 学生作文: In reality, a large number of money have been funded on the development of human population in order to enhance the living standand. Although government and animal lovers have started to assist in conservat... [ 查看全文 ]雅思考试技巧之对一篇作文的详细评点(上的相关文章